Thursday, May 26, 2011

The Rayven's Post(literary) Ikapitong Langit ni Rayven Aledo


Tagumpay mong maituturing sa buhay,
makamit ang ligaya't diwang makulay.
Halos nakaabot ka sa ikapitong langit,
maging iyong mata'y naniningkit.

Ligaya'y 'di lamang tagumpay,
ligaya'y makukuha rin sa kagamitang materyal.
Kalabisan ng iyong saya,
hinay-hinayin at baka mawala.

Mahirap mabuhay sa mundong ito,
mahirap mabuhay ng walang ngiti.
Sa buhay dapat ay may ginto
Ngunit dapat din ay tumigil at huminto.

Ang lahat ng saya'y hinay-hinayin,
iyong ligaya'y himay-himayin.
Tirhan ang kinabukasan ng diwang ito,
upang makamit ang ikapitong langit ng buhay mo.

     "Ikapitong langit" is a poem of mine which i constructed for a friend, this is one of the 5 poems that I made for almost 20 minutes only even though that time was already 12 midnight, maybe because if you are really inspired and focused on anything that you need to do, you will accomplish it beautifully and with grace.

From Rayven with  S H O U T!!

Good evening


Hope you like this post :)



1 comment:

  1. ed maureen serranoMay 27, 2011 at 12:29 AM

    It's my pleasure nak to be one of those people who heard those poem from you..KEEp up the good work Son :)

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